Nice poem.

Good luck with poetry and life.

Have a wonderful day. :)

~Twilight Starr~

The first thing that drew me in to read this poem was the summary and when I started I was captivated. This is written beautifully. It flows smoothly and I love how each stanza begins and ends. I'm adding this to my favorite's list:-) Keep up the great work and may God continue to use you to be a blessing. God Bless!

::Tomorrow Becomes Yesterday::

Love it

Prayers do work, don't they. God's gave you a wonderful gift and it shows through this poem. Beautiful. Excellent write. Keep on spreading His word. God Bless ya.

aww- your poem is awesome it sounds so sincere- perfect!

Whoa... That's strong... That definately has to be from God...

There's no possible way that I can quote a line or stanza that strikes me the most, because it is all so beautiful and heartfelt. Though, for me, that last part speaks the words that I have been praying lately. It's so easy to want what WE want, but until we want and do what GOD wants us to do, we can't be happy.. Thanks much for the simple, yet powerful, words:-) -

I love it. It was beautiful, and the whole time I read it, I kept on thinking that it would make a wonderful song. He really knows how to give you inspiration, doesn't He? It really speaks to a person, how you wrote it. I hope that it's not the last of your poems.

Absolutely beautiful! I've often thought and prayed the very same things, but not nearly as eloquently you have put it. This one is definitley one of my favorites!

This is so beautiful.I feel exactly the same Bless,xx Holdinon2him.

Great poem! God is so good!

Beautiful, I love the depth of devotion expressed in this, the willingness to give yourself completely to him, and it is nicely expressed as well. ;-)

awesome work! This was so sad and yet, a look into how you praise and care. Awesome work.

This is really good and the testimony on how it came to you is great! The whole time I read it, Jeremy Camp's song "You Take Me Back" kept playing in my head. Your message is clear, keep up the great work.

*Luthor-Kingpin.

I really like this. It flows really well, and it's powerful. I like the structure. Sometimes it's hard to pull that off without making it a little akward.(if that makes any sense lol) But you did it very well. Keep it up!