|Reviews for he was velvet|
| writing-to-fill-the-emptiness chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
this poem is amazing! so descriptive & emotional. great metaphors, too! brilliant! :)
| spazmoid chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
truly beautiful. i wish i had more to say, but some pieces are wordless.
| venting-rage chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
I love it... The free-verse and lack of capitalisation definitely add to them poem!
| Pirulina chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
it's so sweet!
| stars shine out chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
Beautiful and heartbreaking, I really like this!
| reaching-for-sunlight chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
That was wonderful. 3
| DarkInkyDreamer chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
this is a beautiful poem, i could really relate to it i will definitely be reading more of your work xx
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| RawrEllieMayMightBeADinosaur chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
This is simply precious, & I loved every bit of it. Yes. I loved it to bits. -favorited-
It's relatable, & I like that. You were very descriptive.
The only fault I found was in the line,
"he was 20 seconds
before sunet, and
he was pretending
Is sunet meant to be sunset, maybe?
All in all, good work.
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| Rumikoholic chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
This has a wonderful, rhythmic flow. I loved your use of periods as breaks, rahter than seperating the stanzas with line spaces.
| Tendrils-of-Insanity chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
Love it a lot :)
| excentricreativity chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
| handsintheair chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
I love this.
| Midnyght chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
Wow, that poem is amazing. I like it. I think it's beautiful and yet sadly I know that feeling.
| Renate Seline Zaz chapter 1 . 9/3/2008
wow amazing ending. great last line.