| Reviews for he was velvet |
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   writing-to-fill-the-emptiness chapter 1 . 12/27/2013 this poem is amazing! so descriptive & emotional. great metaphors, too! brilliant! :) much love -c- |
| spazmoid chapter 1 . 9/16/2013 truly beautiful. i wish i had more to say, but some pieces are wordless. |
| venting-rage chapter 1 . 5/19/2013 I love it... The free-verse and lack of capitalisation definitely add to them poem! |
| Pirulina chapter 1 . 5/19/2013 it's so sweet! |
| stars shine out chapter 1 . 1/22/2013 Beautiful and heartbreaking, I really like this! |
| reaching-for-sunlight chapter 1 . 7/14/2012 That was wonderful. 3 |
| DarkInkyDreamer chapter 1 . 1/15/2012 this is a beautiful poem, i could really relate to it i will definitely be reading more of your work xx |
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| RawrEllieMayMightBeADinosaur chapter 1 . 6/20/2009 This is simply precious, & I loved every bit of it. Yes. I loved it to bits. -favorited- It's relatable, & I like that. You were very descriptive. The only fault I found was in the line, "he was 20 seconds before sunet, and he was pretending all along." Is sunet meant to be sunset, maybe? All in all, good work. -Love from the RM, link on my page. |
| Rumikoholic chapter 1 . 5/20/2009 This has a wonderful, rhythmic flow. I loved your use of periods as breaks, rahter than seperating the stanzas with line spaces. |
| Tendrils-of-Insanity chapter 1 . 1/28/2009 Very good Love it a lot :) |
| excentricreativity chapter 1 . 1/25/2009 Amazing. |
| handsintheair chapter 1 . 12/30/2008 I love this. |
| Midnyght chapter 1 . 10/10/2008 Wow, that poem is amazing. I like it. I think it's beautiful and yet sadly I know that feeling. |
| lumanarann chapter 1 . 9/3/2008 wow amazing ending. great last line. |