Reviews for he was velvet
writing-to-fill-the-emptiness chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
this poem is amazing! so descriptive & emotional. great metaphors, too! brilliant! :)

much love

-c-
spazmoid chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
truly beautiful. i wish i had more to say, but some pieces are wordless.
venting-rage chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
I love it... The free-verse and lack of capitalisation definitely add to them poem!
Pirulina chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
it's so sweet!
stars shine out chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
Beautiful and heartbreaking, I really like this!
reaching-for-sunlight chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
That was wonderful. 3
DarkInkyDreamer chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
this is a beautiful poem, i could really relate to it i will definitely be reading more of your work xx
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RawrEllieMayMightBeADinosaur chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
This is simply precious, & I loved every bit of it. Yes. I loved it to bits. -favorited-

It's relatable, & I like that. You were very descriptive.

The only fault I found was in the line,

"he was 20 seconds

before sunet, and

he was pretending

all along."

Is sunet meant to be sunset, maybe?

All in all, good work.

-Love from the RM, link on my page.
Rumikoholic chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
This has a wonderful, rhythmic flow. I loved your use of periods as breaks, rahter than seperating the stanzas with line spaces.
Tendrils-of-Insanity chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
Very good

Love it a lot :)
excentricreativity chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
Amazing.
handsintheair chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
I love this.
Midnyght chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
Wow, that poem is amazing. I like it. I think it's beautiful and yet sadly I know that feeling.
Renate Seline Zaz chapter 1 . 9/3/2008
wow amazing ending. great last line.
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