|Reviews for he was velvet|
| wishingdreamingwaiting chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
ah! this is going on my favorites list! i love it! what more can i say?
| SeaVoi chapter 1 . 9/14/2005
I like how you use "he was" over and over, Ahh! I just like it, and I don't know why! Nice poem
| Haberdasher chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
superb... really and truely. great imagery and very original, absolutely wonderful.-the Lady Elaine
| White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 9/3/2005
Another wonderfully-written piece. I adore these lines: nasty things/ with nicer names.
I've only read two of your works, but you're already on my favorites list :).
| Dancinggal5389 chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
totally amazing, yet again
| la derniere chose chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
I loved the imagery this poem created. I thought it was amazing an especially liked the " nasty things with nicer names" line. It was lovely in an angsty sort of way. ~Ellie
| my failure chapter 1 . 8/15/2005
i just love this.
| mezzie chapter 1 . 8/14/2005
so many well-turned phrases in here just oozing flavour and colour... the sense of texture you elicit is so beautiful. when I was reading it the first time through I thought o that is my favourite part at "he was broken hearts upon my wall" - then I got to "he was 20 seconds before sunset, and he was pretending all along." and I thought wow now that is my favourite part... lol and then I got to the end, the last four lines and yeah... you guessed it that was my favourite too! lol and so the point of all this is saying that the whole thing was stellar :) love the flavours of it
| Kitten973 chapter 1 . 8/10/2005
This piece is gorgeous, i really like it, because it's apparent simplicity leads into great depth and pain. you can feel the loss. amazing how great pain inspires great art. well done. at least something beautiful can come from something so destructive.
| Sarah-Brighteyes chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
You amaze me once more. Wow... this is the love and hate and desire when you finally find someone you need...or wish to need.
Everytime I read something of yours I am expecting to find something I dont like, because I dont want to psych myself up lol but so far you havent dissapointed me in the least.
Great write once more. Beautiful.
| linaeve chapter 1 . 8/4/2005
beautiful rhyme and rhythm; the poem flows fluidly, and the paradoxes are sheer genius. brilliantly done.
| RomeoandJuliet chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
Oh My God. I don't even know what to say, you have rendered my utterly speachless. YOur words...well none of mine could say how beautiful they are.
| Elizabeth Ebony chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
whoa,great flow and rhytm,love the rhyming too.
| ThisCut-UpAngel chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
Longing? Absolutely wonderful!
| Shinn chapter 1 . 7/30/2005
Lovely. The rhythm of the poem and its bittersweet nostalgic melodies are amazing.