Reviews for he was velvet |
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![]() ![]() ![]() what insight into this being! Lovely. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great! I like how you describe this boy saying he was...this and that. Good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() absolutely amazing, one of the best poems i've read in a while. The style was so unusual and so was the format but it worked beautifully! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this amazes me. the rhyming's great, and I like how you kept repeating. wonderful imagery too. great poem. |
![]() ![]() ![]() usually, i don't like things that repeat this much. but i did really like this. i really liked the 'nasty things with nicer names' part for some reason. and vodka, vodka is a very elegant thing when it comes to alcohol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... that was VERY good. My favorite lines were "he was winking eyesand naughty thoughts" (awesome image there, heh) and "he was pretending all along." The whole thing was great, though. I loved the ending. Beautiful work! Your poetry never ceases to amaze me. It's excellent. Keep writing! . |
![]() ![]() ![]() ohh this one is lovely dear! i relate to it a lot...very good |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the analogies. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the rhyme and the way it flowed :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this is one of my all time favorite poems. Its amazing. Please keep on writing, I love it. *DailyLatte* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting poem. I won't forget this one. Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It flows so beautifully. 'he was lipstick breath/vodka shots, nasty things/with nicer names' I love those lines. Lovely. |