Reviews for Thank You Her Point of View
codyismypup chapter 1 . 2/8/2008
Beautiful job, it made me cry.
miaka1414 chapter 1 . 2/4/2008
Wow. Amazing. This is one of the most emotional pieces that I've ever read. It's just...I can't even think of words to describe it...I think this is well writen. Though that may be an understatement...I look forward to reading other works of yours since this is the first I've read.

x3life chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
this was really long... but really good too ) the style its written in is really different and i enjoyed reading the one-shot
SamanthaNicole chapter 1 . 12/22/2007
I'm not even sure where to begin, to be honest.

I guess I'll just say this: This story is seriously made of win.

What an interesting, brilliant, intelligent way of describing how to get over a first love. I loved the plot, I loved the characters, I loved everything.

When she ran out of the building because she saw the doll, I actually got a little teary-eyed.

Thank you, thank you for writing this. It was truly inspired.


Blessed oblivion chapter 1 . 12/15/2007

I don't know how to say this since i'm not very eloquent but this story is one of the best one shot's i've ever read. It reminds me why i loved reading in the first place. So i guess i just wanted to thank you, for reminding me that the world isn't only filled up with worthless stories. That if i look hard enough i can find brilliance. So Thank You. So very much.
emotionless-stares chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
Oh my god, this is so deep. I was really close to crying..this is really realistic and heart wrenching. I hope you make stories as good as this in the future.
moneymakestheworldgoround chapter 1 . 7/12/2007
this was so sad ... and so sweet ... and so cute. :D

i rly liked this oneshot. nice to read about something different once ins a while. good job! :D
Salt and Vinegar Pringles chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
I just love it.
akb-inactive chapter 1 . 9/27/2006
You reviewed my story so I came here to return the favor.

I'm so happy I did, otherwise I never would have found this beautiful piece of writing.

There were so many emotions in this story, but you were wonderful, I felt all of them as if all the things in the story were happening to me. One thing I love is how the events are so true to life, they DO happen.

Also, I like how Him1 was always this point of comparison in her life, because yes, he was her first love. But I also love how he was still so nice and honest to her, even when he married. He was a genuine/perfect guy, but I guess she realized in the end, that he wasn't the one for her. I'm really having a hard time writing down what I felt because I really loved this story. It was beatuiful.

I love her growing relationship with Him2. It's so... sweet to read, with all the squabbles but how they always seem to be there with one another, no matter the circumstances.

Gah! This is definitely going to my Favorite Stories list! :D
Chocolate Herrings chapter 1 . 9/23/2006
Beautiful. You did an amazing job of describing her mixed feelings towards Him1 as well as Him2. I cried in the middle...when He2 gets a girlfriend...and then again, when she finds the doll.
punkturnedwriter chapter 1 . 8/26/2006
Wow, is all I can say. Normally I make a huge fuss about grammatical errors and typos, but in this story, though there were a few, I barely noticed because it was so BEAUTIFUL. The raw emotion shone through the words, and I could actually FEEL my heart break and throb with joy along with the protagonist. It really is an excellent fic. It's going on my Favorites list for sure.
wanderingnachos chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
I love this story! I went to read your inspiration for it, too, and it was really cool! The really great part of it is how you don't use names _ I thought that was a nice touch. Your writing is simple, but it really shows the emotions. Wonderful job!
morganelena chapter 1 . 1/16/2006
Wow. I'm speechless.

This was beautiful. It really was. I especially love the last few lines:

"You taught me to love. You taught me the good and bad of it. I wouldn't be here if it weren't for you. And I'll always be grateful to you for that..."

Arni chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
Wow. I'm really speechless.

Takes a moment to gather thoughts.

Basically I love this fic. I love the way it is being structured. All thoughts. No name. And everything in the gal's pt of view. There's abit of poetic feeling to the fic too.

The changing of the tense in the ending was a bit surprising to me. Had to reread the section again to really grasp wat actually happen. Indeed, we will never forget our first love. they taught us a well earned lesson in life n love.

FSlSlayer chapter 1 . 7/19/2005 dono what to say... :(
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