Reviews for Time in Your Head
me chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
in one word: intriguing, unusual, interesting.

was it inspired by a stopry or just your head being creative. or as a you just said a person (am i correct?) im so smart i can read your mind. right this review is about your poem good very gooddo you guys have frosted flakes for breakfast because i like them a lot almost as much as i like... fruit loops and keegan. and that zebra bra that doesn't fit me.
Slowly Sinking chapter 1 . 7/17/2005
I love the optimism in this poem, and the way it comes full circle. Great imagery; fantastic writing. Keep it up.