|Reviews for Massacre of Pentil|
| PF chapter 1 . 12/8/2005
kind-a weird, i admit i skipped the beggining, but i get the idea. but why kill the rest? Maybe u should start yoga ;)
| blonde-and-blubbering-one chapter 1 . 7/23/2005
I'm not quesy, or faint hearted, but put it this way... a little too bloody,kinda dark, has a unreadable meaning. I didn't get it. I sorta whizzed through it though.
| Ballerina with a Gun chapter 1 . 7/18/2005
Hmm...this is interesting.
Although, I think it should be expanded into a novel and not a cramped little one-shot. Because it is a one-shot (or I think it is anyway - the ending was...definitely final), everything seems rushed and confusing. I think it would be an excellent story however.
Good plot - keep writing!