|Reviews for It's okay|
| darkmistresslae chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
wow. this is so sad. but it's so nice... the forgiving. yeahh. i liked it. i lvoed the repition of the title. that's something that i'm usually a huge sucker for, so yay! good job with that. some parts i think you could've expanded on your wordchoice a bit. that would've made it a bit more... i dont know..mature sounding? i mean, it was fine the way it was, but some more colourful verbs/adjectives would really add to the imagery and stuff. nice start though!
| Anna178 chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
Really powerful, you portray the emotion brilliantly.
| The Depths of Blue chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
So pitiable. Beautfily written and spoken. How hurtful a person can be to one of our most vital parts. Humanity... at its worst,
-The Depths of Blue
| dancingintherain chapter 1 . 8/5/2005
wow this was absolutely breathatking! great job, your words flow so nicely in sync with the other verses-
keep it up!
| SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
I like this a lot, I like how you start each stanza. Very deep piece. Nicely put and I'm so sorry for not reviewing recently! I really am a lousy reviewer sometimes! queenvixta
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/23/2005
wow... nice repition...very sad ending... i like it a lot
| AllyCred chapter 1 . 7/23/2005
this was a great piece of poetry and as you know i know exactly how you feel, but this person who causes you this much pain shouldn't be in ur life anymore, the best thing i ever did was break my relatonship with the one person who was really destroying me, and i think you need to do that aswel if you're gona come through this, i hope ur okay and thank you so much for the e-mail it means a lot and i hope we can talk on MSN soon...again well done with the poem, you can pull through, don't worry and i'm always gona be here for you, i love you friend. lots of love ~AllyCred~
| aries-diva-JC chapter 1 . 7/23/2005
good job... depressing but well written... it flows very well too... keep up the good work...
| xoxoMizzatxoxo chapter 1 . 7/19/2005
Sad, but very good. Someone once told me that God will never give you anything that you can't handle. Always remeber that and keep up the good work. Please read and review!
| Bunnie09 chapter 1 . 7/17/2005
um...random? I like your poem. It is aweshum! - Please R&R my poetry! thanx! pyrofiregirl101