Reviews for Rain |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this is a very nice poem. it has a good visual reference |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the rain too, it's so cleansing. Beautifully gothic poem too, especially the last few lines. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have great rhythm until the part with "a soothing balm" and then it gets shaky. Esp. the "animosity" just stands out too much as awkward. Otherwise really nice language. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wonderful! I love the rain. it is certainly my favorite type of weather to dance in. This poem really describes the ecstacy that is entwined in such a carefree, misunderstood time. Most see rain as depressing... I see them as idiots. well thats me. Beautifully written... Keep up the great work! *~Sita |