Reviews for Rain
Cheesy Brussle Sprouts chapter 1 . 7/20/2005
this is a very nice poem. it has a good visual reference
in theory chapter 1 . 7/18/2005
I like the rain too, it's so cleansing. Beautifully gothic poem too, especially the last few lines.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/18/2005
You have great rhythm until the part with "a soothing balm" and then it gets shaky. Esp. the "animosity" just stands out too much as awkward. Otherwise really nice language.
Sita Fuoco chapter 1 . 7/18/2005
wonderful! I love the rain. it is certainly my favorite type of weather to dance in. This poem really describes the ecstacy that is entwined in such a carefree, misunderstood time. Most see rain as depressing... I see them as idiots. well thats me.

Beautifully written...

Keep up the great work!

*Sita