Reviews for Quiet Thoughts
Boom Kitty chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
I'm running out of ways to describe your poems. Breathtaking? Yes, this is breathtaking. And like all the others I've read, it's beautiful.
Squidge VR6 chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
WOW...

How on earth did you get so good at descriptions! AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME...just...AAWWSSEEOOMMEE!
Thorn's-girl chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
Peaceful and unsettlingly beautiful. Satisfying. The writing is unparalled. Extrememly well done. Golden, soft and timeless.
sixtytwokg chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
this was cool, i don't read poetry well but there were some lines

"- I feel as if I just missed that moment – like it was something

I should have treasured

But did not"

that i thought were well-chosen
aknightsgoldenrose chapter 1 . 7/19/2005
Beautiful descriptions. It was so relaxing. I think you captured the transition wonderfully.
Eyes Unclouded chapter 1 . 7/18/2005
I think you really did capture that sluggish afternoon/evening feeling, especially in the image of that water droplet getting bigger. The italicized parts were smart. One nitpick (mwuahahaha!): "I marvel: evening has set!" Using a colon seems kind of weird. What do you think?

Wonderful job!