Reviews for So Transparent
Caz chapter 1 . 7/19/2005
This is so... Sad, I like the second to last paragraph, very effective... You know i'm crap at reviews... So... Awesome, as always. You have talent I want... :(
the twoie chapter 1 . 7/19/2005
I love it. It's very good and it just pulled me in to the their world. It could use some more descriptions perhaps thematic and explain why she killed her self. Read my story "The Beach At the Chateuax(Revised Edition)" It's alot like this
i-wish-it-was-make-believe chapter 1 . 7/18/2005
wonderful! very powerful emotions in this work.