| Reviews for This can't be happening |
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   DofD chapter 2 . 11/9/2011 And now we see what happened. |
| DofD chapter 1 . 11/9/2011 Gotta love mothers who wait til the last second to tell you their leaving. |
| love the story chapter 20 . 10/23/2011 Great story,BUT I would take off where you said that they were not going break up at the side note of the bottom of the chapter because I lost interest in the story (and almost didn't finish the story because you basically told the ending) because you want to leave that mystery until the end of the story. I love all your stories though and this is like the third one I have read of yours... |
| Queen Midnight chapter 20 . 8/15/2011 Jeez! Four children! Wow! They'll have a hand full before you know it. haha! Anyways, great story! However, it seemed a tad rushed, but that's about it. Keep on writing! |
| gnomie chapter 19 . 8/8/2011 watching tourettes documentary girl called jess and counseller derek... feel soz for her tho cuz shes misunderstoof :( anyho LOVE THESE GUYS! |
| gnomie chapter 16 . 8/8/2011 DAMMIT! I WANT A BWM! NOT FAIR! lolll bwm lol |
| gnomie chapter 15 . 8/8/2011 prevent pervet right? x |
| gnomie chapter 14 . 8/8/2011 OMG LOL! I read all ur other stroies first lol! Btw - when they make making him notice into a movie im being Laila- Just sayin :P |
| 100percentfan chapter 20 . 5/2/2011 i loved this story! |
| foxbagels chapter 20 . 9/27/2010 Love this story! |
| DNAstar chapter 20 . 9/17/2010 aw thats cute |
| That One Reviewer chapter 6 . 8/3/2010 This story is very predictable. I lost interest as soon as I hit chapter six. It moves to fast. Your characters are plain, and boring to read about. They basically have no personality. Now, there is a slight chance that since this story was written about 4 years ago that the idea would have been considered original. Your grammar is good. And the spelling is fine. Just the switches between the point of views is very annoying to me. For future stories, I think that you should just write from one perspective unless things need to be cleared up. Writing in Derek's POV gave everything away. Tell me if you think this review is too harsh. I can take what it. |
| sophiegirl2013 chapter 20 . 8/1/2010 I just love stories like this. Its a great ending. Keep writing stories like this. |
| Jimmi J chapter 20 . 7/10/2010 Loved it :) |
| CharlotteBradhadair chapter 20 . 6/16/2010 i really liked it - it was really sweet! charlotte |