Reviews for This can't be happening
Lightning Storm chapter 9 . 8/13/2005
I love this all, and I can't wait to read your future plans. Update soon.
awaitinglove chapter 8 . 8/8/2005
ok you guys are freakin pychic i swear! haha i was going to actually have lisa make some "move" on Derek then jessica will walk in on them and stuff like that xD or instead of lisa i could have some random girl he has talked to before or something -thinks- well lol im like not even half of the way there for chapter 8 but it will be up soon :)
RowRow34 chapter 8 . 8/8/2005
well obviously jess and dereck are gonna start dating, but maybe u can make lisa jelous of Jess er summtin...or make ben jelous of dereck and they get in a big fight...O! thnx, Rowan
LilLaTLuv chapter 8 . 8/7/2005

Don't worry! I won't do anything! Thanks for the warning at least! UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! Please?

Luv ya,Tashi :)
nathalsa chapter 8 . 8/7/2005
Wow, this is really good! I think Lisa should develop a crush on Derek to make things a little more complicated. Like, maybe Jess could think he likes HER instead, so she gets all pissed because she thinks he was leading her on, and then one night Lisa, Jake, Mandy, and Ben decide to give them a night alone to discuss everything because they think the two are MADE for each other? So they all say they have excuses and whatnot... I think it'd be totally awesome! This story is really good as is, though :)
AngelQt82217 chapter 8 . 8/7/2005
o man i have to wait even longer... i guess thats okay, sry but i have no ideas at the moment!
sta4eva chapter 7 . 8/4/2005
oh derek is cute lol keep writing this story! I added this story to my favorites
Mew-Berry chapter 7 . 8/4/2005
I really like this story! Very well written good job! _
RowRow34 chapter 7 . 8/3/2005
AWESOME, AWESOME AWESOME! im so happy! this story is so cool... i can NOT WAIT for the next chappie! thnx lots, Rowan
devil's-fav-angel chapter 7 . 8/3/2005
stuff happened was good but slow it down a tad bit to make it more suspenseful. great job
LilLaTLuv chapter 7 . 8/3/2005

Lol. That's alright! I do that all the time! One time, I had written a chappie COMPLETELY but I forgot about it and didn't put it up for five MONTHS! How forgetful is that! I mean, I looked in on it, but I thought all of them were posted, and they weren't! Lol. But great chappie! Now they are all alone on a secluded beach! Hehehe. I can't wait to see what you have up you sleeve! UPDATE SOON!

Luv ya,Tashi :)
idontgetit91 chapter 7 . 8/3/2005
Ah! Make them kiss! Those stupid little kids. I love Derek. I wish I was Jessica. Oh, I am so jealous. Please hurry up with the next one. I think I have an addiction. If you don't write more, I'll die. You wouldn't want me to die would you? Don't answer that...
dOrKy-GuRl03 chapter 7 . 8/2/2005
hey girl...that was a good they were so freaking close to kissing...keep updating loving it...
bubblegum-300 chapter 7 . 8/2/2005
hey, this was a great should continue fast. i am really enjoying it! love thw whole beach house idea...and the whole hate/like's real great. continue soon please!
ashley nichole chapter 7 . 8/2/2005
Hey! great chapter. I cant wait for the next one. update soon.
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