Reviews for This can't be happening
Lightning Storm chapter 4 . 7/25/2005
I really liked this chapter, it seems like Derek likes Jess, but won't admit it, even to himself. I love it!

I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon
devil's-fav-angel chapter 4 . 7/24/2005
it was decent Jessica should be a little 'bitchy' it makes her seem right for derek
floozie in the jacuzzi chapter 4 . 7/23/2005
Really good chappter! Update soon
ashley nichole chapter 4 . 7/22/2005
Hey! I love your story. Derek actually doesn't seem to bad. He seems really nice. I think I'd act the same way as Jessica did at the party. I hate it when people start fights for no reason like Nicole was trying to do. And whats Nicole's prob? they were going out for like 4 days! im glad they broke up tho. Derek seems to like Jessica...Cant wait for chapter 5!
dOrKy-GuRl03 chapter 4 . 7/22/2005
hey girl...that was a good chapter...wonder what is going to happens next?..keep updating loving it...
Aislin20 chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
Great story! I loved the characters! Great chemistry between Derek and Jessica. Can't wait to see what happens between them.
Akia Blakemore chapter 4 . 7/22/2005
interesting premise. i like the idea. keep up the good work. i'll be reading. ;]
RowRow34 chapter 4 . 7/22/2005
great chapter! good layout/where the scenes take place. can't wait till the next chapter Luv, ~Rowan
LilLaTLuv chapter 4 . 7/22/2005

I Loved this chapter! The whole I'm tougher than you thing was pretty cool! She wasn't TOO bitchy, and that witch pushed her into it, anyway! GREAT JOB! UPDATE SOON! Please?

Luv ya,Tashi :)
Mini May chapter 4 . 7/22/2005
good job good job! i loved it! things are deffinatly going to get interesting when Derek gets to the cabin! WHOO CANT WAIT! update soon!
awaitinglove chapter 3 . 7/21/2005
Ok, thanks everyone for all your reviews Yes ill try to update soon and yes i know i had a TON of mistakes in this chapter. I'm sorry, i was too lazy to reread the chapter :P I'm writing the fourth chapter and it should be up soon!
dOrKy-GuRl03 chapter 3 . 7/21/2005
hey girl...that was such a good chapter...keep posting loving it...going good so far...
ashley nichole chapter 3 . 7/21/2005
Hey! Great story so far. I can't wait to read the rest of it!
Katara Rinsho chapter 3 . 7/21/2005
This is mostly a review of all of them...

I loved them all and you must update soon! You have a couple of minor mistakes in the 3rd chapter... i remember something at the end of the flash anyways... You have to update soon!

aknightsgoldenrose chapter 3 . 7/21/2005
This story is great so far. Its very good for a first story. :D
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