Reviews for This can't be happening
RowRow34 chapter 3 . 7/21/2005
awesome chappie! i can really see the chemistry...great job! good luck in figuring out where the next chappie takes place!*hugs*Rowan
Mini May chapter 3 . 7/21/2005
Hey this is a great story! I love this! i can not wait untill you update! Great job!
B.R.35 chapter 3 . 7/21/2005
I like it! Sounds like it is going to be an interesting summer! Keep on writing!
devil's-fav-angel chapter 3 . 7/21/2005
hey this is really good i like how fast paced this story is hurry up and update
LilLaTLuv chapter 3 . 7/21/2005

GREAT CHAPPIE! Things are starting to heat up. I did notice one mistake, though. You said Nicole's POV, but it was Jess'! But it was great anyway! UPDATE SON!

Luv ya,Tashi :)
Lightning Storm chapter 3 . 7/21/2005
I liked this chapter, its was good.

I have a friend just like Camille, we're more protective over each other than an older brother lol.

Update soon.
Lightning Storm chapter 2 . 7/20/2005
I really like your story so far, it doesn't sound like your a begining writter, this is written really good.
LilLaTLuv chapter 2 . 7/20/2005

I don't know why, I think it was good! UPDATE SOON! I want to see what you have planned for fantabulous story!

Luv ya,Tashi :)
floozie in the jacuzzi chapter 2 . 7/20/2005
The beginning is good..

I'm surprised you said you're just beginning because most beginners are SO perky when they first write.

Anyways. Yeah... Keep writing.
awaitinglove chapter 2 . 7/20/2005
haha thanks everyone and yes most of your questions will be answered in the next chapter which im doing right now :o
dOrKy-GuRl03 chapter 2 . 7/20/2005
omg this is so good...keep posting girl...wonder what happens at derek's house? loving it...going good so far though..
RowRow34 chapter 2 . 7/20/2005
Good chappie. I can't wait to hear what happened. Maybe there is some chemistry between derek and jess? Kool, keep writing!

PhoenixFire415 chapter 2 . 7/20/2005
This is so interesting! I really like it. What happened? The fire? What is this supposed to mean and lead to? So many questions! And all of them, or, at least, some of them would be answered in the next chapter, I hope! What I am saying is clear and simple. Please, update soon!
Daydreamer-angel chapter 2 . 7/20/2005
i no how oit is to rite ur first fic , that waht i'm doing now but for a beginner ur really good
Jiva chapter 1 . 7/19/2005
Well it will be interesting to see what happens with this story. So far I think it's pretty good! Update soon! **Jiva**
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