|Reviews for This can't be happening|
| sausti0202 chapter 20 . 5/9/2010
I love this story! I like that you didn't feel the need to be predictable by having some sort of big fight occur within the last couple of chapters where the couple breaks up and then they resolve their differences through some big gesture in the last chapter. As much as couples fight in real life, I know that there are relationships (like my own) where outside of normal arguments, things are pretty much smooth sailing. I just love their relationship!
| JustWords chapter 20 . 5/6/2010
Cute story! loved it! ;D
| love75love7 chapter 20 . 4/6/2010
aw... i loved it!
its good to read a story were the couple dont break up in the middle or the story.
keep writing xx
| igot4 chapter 20 . 4/3/2010
I love this story because it was just a love story
about two people falling in love and staying in love
no conflicts no drama it was great! Every now and then we need
to read stories like that the only thing that was missing is what happen to
his and her parents. Other than that it was great.
| RoseBriar32192 chapter 20 . 3/14/2010
OMG! I loved this story! It was SO amazing! I hope I'll get to read some omre of your stories soon! - RoseBriar
(P.S. - WE HAVE THE SAME NAME! Is that kool or WHAT!)
| jyottoor chapter 20 . 2/21/2010
this story was relly good you did a great job with it :D
| jyottoor chapter 2 . 2/20/2010
so far i like the story :)
| clichefan101 chapter 20 . 12/25/2009
aw, this story was soo good! aw, it was adorable and i loved it. and derek,... m. he is nicee. :)
well done on such a good story and congrats on being such a good writer! x
| ghurl00 chapter 20 . 12/6/2009
Aww.. Cute ending!)) Well done!:)
| hopeless romantic chapter 20 . 11/15/2009
THANK GOD ANOTHER PERSON WHO LIKES THE CUTE SIMPLE LOVE STORY! You know I was kinda getting sick of the relationships that have them say they love each other but then something happens and they break up and they get back together and it was just getting old. So I am completely in love with this story! I loved how it was so hard for them to fall in love but when they did they stayed (really glad you didn't make them break up) I thought it was cute how you showed the love between them. It was a cute story that i enjoyed reading every moment! Brilliant! Love it great job keep writing i want to hear more from you!
| Latindancer4ever chapter 12 . 9/28/2009
Hey there! I'm so sorry for not reviewing earlier! I absolutely love this story and I didn't realize I wasn't reviewing. As I was reading, I suddenly realized something about this story that was like a conk in the head. My name is Jessica and my boyfriends name is Derek! Hahaha! I'm such a retard. Love the story :)
| SpanishHazel14 chapter 20 . 9/21/2009
omg omg omg plz plz plz plz make a sequel 2 this i loved it and i read it all in one night thats how much i couldn't get enough of it im also reading making him notice then im goin to read the sequel of that one plz right a sequel for this one pretty please with a cherry on top
| Ivix chapter 20 . 7/27/2009
wow.. fourth child? ahahah they need a tv
| chocolate chip.cookies chapter 2 . 7/19/2009
its good so far, but i think there are way too many exclamation points in this chapter. they're suppose to make a sentence seen exciting, or something, but when there are so many, it makes it weird.
| thefrogsareattacking chapter 20 . 7/16/2009
Aww, it was so sweet! Love the happy ending and the baby boy having his father's smirk, to cute. Great story!