Reviews for This can't be happening |
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![]() ![]() ![]() *sigh* Okay fine, you've convinced me. I think its time to buy me an island with a bunch of hotties. :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() you have no idea how weird it is to read my name in a story. Camille isn't exactly common :P anyway I'm liking the story so Ima gonna keep reading. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, so i know this story is already complete but im in a reviewing mood so chances are your gonna be getting a couple of reviews tonight :P Oh and funny thing, so i live in Australia making early June winter here. It rains al the time in June :P anyway you'll probs hear from me soon :D xoxo |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! I like that you didn't feel the need to be predictable by having some sort of big fight occur within the last couple of chapters where the couple breaks up and then they resolve their differences through some big gesture in the last chapter. As much as couples fight in real life, I know that there are relationships (like my own) where outside of normal arguments, things are pretty much smooth sailing. I just love their relationship! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute story! loved it! ;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw... i loved it! its good to read a story were the couple dont break up in the middle or the story. keep writing xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story because it was just a love story about two people falling in love and staying in love no conflicts no drama it was great! Every now and then we need to read stories like that the only thing that was missing is what happen to his and her parents. Other than that it was great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! I loved this story! It was SO amazing! I hope I'll get to read some omre of your stories soon! - RoseBriar (P.S. - WE HAVE THE SAME NAME! Is that kool or WHAT!) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story was relly good you did a great job with it :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() so far i like the story :) |
![]() ![]() aw, this story was soo good! aw, it was adorable and i loved it. and derek,... m. he is nicee. :) well done on such a good story and congrats on being such a good writer! x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww.. Cute ending!)) Well done!:) |
![]() ![]() THANK GOD ANOTHER PERSON WHO LIKES THE CUTE SIMPLE LOVE STORY! You know I was kinda getting sick of the relationships that have them say they love each other but then something happens and they break up and they get back together and it was just getting old. So I am completely in love with this story! I loved how it was so hard for them to fall in love but when they did they stayed (really glad you didn't make them break up) I thought it was cute how you showed the love between them. It was a cute story that i enjoyed reading every moment! Brilliant! Love it great job keep writing i want to hear more from you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey there! I'm so sorry for not reviewing earlier! I absolutely love this story and I didn't realize I wasn't reviewing. As I was reading, I suddenly realized something about this story that was like a conk in the head. My name is Jessica and my boyfriends name is Derek! Hahaha! I'm such a retard. Love the story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg omg omg plz plz plz plz make a sequel 2 this i loved it and i read it all in one night thats how much i couldn't get enough of it im also reading making him notice then im goin to read the sequel of that one plz right a sequel for this one pretty please with a cherry on top |