Reviews for This can't be happening |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wow.. fourth child? ahahah they need a tv |
![]() ![]() ![]() its good so far, but i think there are way too many exclamation points in this chapter. they're suppose to make a sentence seen exciting, or something, but when there are so many, it makes it weird. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, it was so sweet! Love the happy ending and the baby boy having his father's smirk, to cute. Great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() bravo, bravo |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahh, sweet chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() cute story |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww...this story is soo cute! i love it! xoxo failwithpride |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg! That was one of the best stories i've ever read! I especially loved the epilogue! i'm glad no one died or anything, i hate sad stories! I can't wait to check out your other stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story! Great job! I love Derek and Jess together, they are so cute! |
![]() ![]() you should make a story staring Anthony Sanders |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is a very sweet story. I like it. |
![]() ![]() aw i want more! i loved this. i had the perfect image of them and like you said they make a great couple the kids are even cuter! |
![]() ![]() I have a question, why Anthony? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just love thier relationship right now, it's so sweet |
![]() ![]() ![]() this part is soo cute:) I love it |