Reviews for Slipping Away
RomeoandJuliet chapter 1 . 7/29/2005
Very enjoyable and easy to relate to. You truly conveyed your feeling through your writting.
Needa S chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
Such a heartfelt piece, very touching. You done an Awesome job putting this together.

Needa S.
Young King101 chapter 1 . 7/20/2005
Good God you are so deep! But don't worry, God will show you who the One is; but don't forget this, remember it and live through it, stay friends with her, dog. This is so good, 5 stars.

Jasmine chapter 1 . 7/19/2005
That was a really great poem. If it is true though, my advise is just to tell her the truth cause you never know, she may feel the same. Good job!