Pretty, and your pen name interested me too. Nice work :)

Wow - these poems are so heartfelt and I can tell they have come from the heart. You write with a lovely flare - continue! Thank you for my review for TRRT- it is very much appreciated! :) ~DS~

hey, these are really good! Keep up the great work

hmm...again the tone feels, I don't know, skewed. A little too much repitition on the "5 years" I think. But good rhythm. However, I have no idea what happened to the speaker.

um...oddly enough, it feels like you're telling the story from an outside perspective. Like, if you had it in third person instead of first, it would make sense.

I mean, the bitter "life made me this way" fits, but saying that "I have an...attititude" and "hoping/ that one day/ I will live" just feels like a conflicting tone to me. Psychologically, it doesn't make sense, I don't know...maybe if it were after-the-fact.

There's also some typos on the line "lite up m life" 'lit' and 'my' instead, I think.

I do like the repitition of "wishing/ hoping" that works well.

"is it right to wake up everyday and dread the sun?"

I love that line.

OH! very nice and descriptive. i liked it alot!

Beautiful work.

5 years is a long time. Maybe something really great will change your life in the future and you'll go back to being happy and carefree.

Yep, I go through that every single day.

It's definitely a trip.

I guess you just have to make yourself open up to people. I have to. It's really hard, but sometimes, it can make life a lot easier.

Hmm... Yeah... Life's a bitch.

That. Is. Exactly. How. I. Feel.

Enough said.

Awesome poem

Cute. I like it.

P.S. "the prophecy" sounds cool!