|Reviews for Ugly|
| Val Mora chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
Interesting. It's a good concept, describing the feelings of a boy who's being used to prop up this girl's ego. I feel bad for him.
Um, quick note: in the fourth line, did you really mean to say 'she pains the perfect portrait'? I think the 't' might have been forgotten. ) I didn't notice the first time 'round, but the second, I found it a little distracting.
I thought it was kind of repetitive to begin almost all the lines with 'she' - and while that was probably intentional on your part, I thought the poem could have used a little more variation in its structures.
Other than that, good work!
| Kuzuki Sugimorii chapter 1 . 10/25/2005
Hmm, well, it does describe who I think it's about very well, but I don't agree with what it says about you. Still, well written. I like.
| Yokotaashi chapter 1 . 8/22/2005
Its so true, some girls are like that. Gr. great writing
| BleedTrueBeauty chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
like most of your work, i love this. i like that its not long, but at the same not short. i like it