I loved it.

wow

This was absolutely beautiful and so very well written.
Thank you for sharing.

-L

Oh my goodness, this is probably my favourite short story I have ever read, and I hope I remember this for years to come because its just well in Melly's words 'So real' she is real as is Randy. I loved this, thank you for writing it. :)

Oh my god. I cried so fucking much. This was amazing . I could relate to the speaker so much. The love of pain, loving someone you can't have, bitter sarcasm . All that. This made my night. Thank you

so beautiful, in writing style and plotline. amazing

That was very painfully beautiful. *goes off to reread*

That was beautiful. A whole range of emotions wrapped up into one gorgeous story- I went from laughing at the image of Melly flipping that guy off to crying at the end. Absolutely beautiful.

I love this story, its beautiful and wonderful. It actually made cry. Thanks for sharing.

This is the most brilliant fiction I have ever read.

It had me crying throughout it's entirity (I'm male), and tears are still comming down.

This is so good I'll never forget it. Bookmarked for eternity - In my mind and my browser.

omgg :'0

so beautiful

That was beautiful. Don't think I need to say much more. Made me cry. Genuinely sad tone and great writing created an Awesome Story.

Beautifully written.

That was one of the best stories I have ever read. It made me cry. Thank you for that.

i love the Melly character. a different sad but happy story. very well done.