Reviews for romance beneath the sheets
White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
M. I love this. Another fabulously written poem. It reminds me of a mix between to of my poems, 'Freckles Like Sand' and 'White Sheets'.

Okay, you're on my favorite author's list now.
Moonjava chapter 1 . 8/14/2005
Wow, this one is really good. Sorry about my previous review. OKay so it's rather out of context. I apologize for I think and hope you know what I meant by ways another good poem.
smile persephone chapter 1 . 8/10/2005
Amazingamazingamazing. Did I mention brilliant? I just adore the last line. As well stanzas one through three. Yes, I just love all of it.
apromptedpoet chapter 1 . 7/23/2005

I heart this man! Total sweetness!

It's so cute!


Much Love-Suicidal_Greeting
beti213 chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
wow. intense. the second stanza especially...whoohoo! good stuff.
acrobia chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
Beautiful descriptions, I love the way you start all the stanzas with the same line, and the effect that is created. The word choice also makes us feel the breath, it's just amaizing. Keep up the good work!
lackluster chapter 1 . 7/19/2005
Brilliant! i'm speechless. but this was a GREAT poem!
Infection chapter 1 . 7/19/2005
loved the last line which was in the bracket, i also liked the theme and content, good job.