Awesome metaphors! Flows very well! The repetativeness is so perfectly timed; it doesn't get boring! I love this line "Are your memories drawn in blood or wine?" Very powerful! Keep it up!

Wow. Great poem. I really like it. I love horses, and I love morbid, depressing poetry, so this is perfect for me! Thank you! ~pyrofiregirl101~

i love horses an the similie between the spoken to persons personality and a wild or dark horse was very well matched. i've actually tried to do the same but it never came out half as good as yours dark horse has a wild one inside...somewhere.