|Reviews for Lying Little Girl|
| Teddy Ricker chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
That was very good! Though, it does leave me wondering where you have gotten all of that angr from. It was a very well written poem! P'Dale Buddy out
| lackluster chapter 1 . 7/20/2005
"Hey Little Girl,/Are you down on your luck?/Well guess what,/I don’t give a fuck." now that stanza is brillint and raw. nicely done!