|Reviews for Adrift|
| Needa S chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
I think ya should capitalize it makes it more appealing. Don't get me wrong because I think it is a beautiful piece. Awesome job.
| The Postscript chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
I really, really like this one. The images, the simple but powerful word choice...everything just fits together. Is there a reason you have not been capitalizing words, though? Anyway, wonderful job, again. You continue to amaze me and inspire me. Thank you for your reviews, again, for I can never thank you enough. Keep writing.
| Sarah-Brighteyes chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
Imagery that reminds me of Heavens breathe. The ending stanza is like a soft whisper of hope. I loved this. Beauitful imagery. I love the metaphor of life in general. Wonderful. Thank you.
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/20/2005
I love the last two lines, so secure and reassuring.