Reviews for MEMEST: The Beginning
Brisk33 chapter 1 . 9/29/2005
This is pretty good,but I think you should get a beta reader. There are a lot of simple mistakes and some of the reactions seem short lived or just plain inhuman. Think if you suddenly found out you had super powers would you be ok with it within an hour if it freaked you out at first, ect. Anyways good work. Post a new one when you get a chance.