Reviews for Because You Have No Faith
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 11/29/2005
the voice in this is extraordinary. tone sets the mood and delivers the lines with feeling. second to last stanza is wonderful and truthful.
poet tree chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
I couldn't help but read this aloud in a British accent. It would be a great recital piece.

I like the diction you wrote. It's very well done.
fragglerock chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
Very well done.
RedundantRocker chapter 1 . 7/23/2005
Oh wow, this..this is so beautiful! It's funny, becase I felt the need to add an olden day British accent to the words. As if the news boy was standing on the corner of my street shouting out the words.

It's very nice. I think I'll go read the rest of your poetry!
naughtgreen chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
The diction is amusing.
Leylique Morrow chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
While I respect you as a writer, this just broke my heart outright. I don't understand how you could possibly be talking about the same God whom I love and dedicate my life to serving.

As to the dynamics and all of the poem...Some of your rhymes again sound forced. Your tempo is all over the place; some of your lines don't appear to have anything to do with the rest of the poem. You've done a good job of getting your point across, and that's about it. Not to be overly critical. -Leila
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
Very spiritual and philosophical. I must ponder this piece.