Reviews for Mistake
Out-Of-Reality chapter 1 . 8/26/2005
The rhythm dissappeared a few times but the message was defenitely more important. Somethign we've all thought about...Ver well written!
Gothic Renegade chapter 1 . 7/25/2005
"You’ve spent your whole lifeProving your worth to peopleWho never thought twice about youAnd that was your biggest mistake"

I love it. It's so sad yet beautiful. Another great piece.-Jinx
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
I can totally relate.. great job
xoxoMizzatxoxo chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
Very Good. Please read and review!