Reviews for Burn
Jezsh chapter 6 . 4/4/2006
lovely progression, the interplay of fire and water. I like the power of your words.
Sita Fuoco chapter 6 . 8/19/2005
Wonderfully written. Each haiku so descriptive. It's hard to find haikus with such emotion, and it seems so effortless. Usually, you get lost and have no idea what the haiku is about. Yours have perfect - or near perfect - diction, and are just - as said - wonderful. I hope you write more, I really enjoy reading your work. Keep it up!

Cheesy Brussle Sprouts chapter 6 . 7/22/2005
umm... all i can say is WOW!

Cheesy Brussle Sprouts chapter 5 . 7/22/2005
this is a very powerful poem, the whole collection is actually

Cheesy Brussle Sprouts chapter 4 . 7/22/2005
this is a most interesting collection of poems. well i must read on to see how it turns out. wonderful poem keep writing!

Cheesy Brussle Sprouts chapter 3 . 7/22/2005
anger, doth it burn?
Cheesy Brussle Sprouts chapter 2 . 7/22/2005
kind of defiant, kinda
Cheesy Brussle Sprouts chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
cool poem
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 6 . 7/21/2005
Very nice.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 5 . 7/21/2005
Nice contrast between tears and fire.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 4 . 7/21/2005
WOW. That last line just blew me away.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 3 . 7/21/2005
This is one of my favs.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 2 . 7/21/2005
I love this motif of burning and fire.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
Very vivid, powerful.
Lacus chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
Veyr Powerful- the meaning came through very clearly and had a sence of power to it, very good.