Reviews for self construction
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
Sweet. Beautiful. You are an incredible writer.
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
Second stanza was the best; it just really got me. great job.
ash vault rose garden chapter 1 . 7/23/2005
I like your angsty works -, and you're really great at them _
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
good poem. i like the ending and the sincere smile part keep writing!
thank you thoughtful chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
breath-taking.
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
very emotional and expressive... i liked how you said "never look back" at the end. thanks for sharing and keep writing!
Cloud Burst chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
very powerful and absorbing. awesome poem!