Hello! I bet a lot of people will be able to relate to your poem.

Well, the feeling you are trying to put into the poem is understandable. Thats a good thing.

But for constructive criticism, don't forget to use punctuations. And double-check for typos. )

But anyways, keep posting!

I can really relate to this poem, when I read it, it brought me back to my sophmore year of high school. The only difference is while I didn't like my sophmore year of high school, I DO like this poem, keep writing.