Reviews for Masks
darkmistresslae chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
Hm. I liked it. I think how you said you wear different masks and they cause different things was a good point and it did good for the poem. My favourite line was definatly "I wear a mask because I am nothing / Maybe with it on, I am something" it spoke to me... My only suggestion would be to fix the ending somehow. It seemed abrubt/choppy or something. But I can't really say how to fix it, so no need to regard me. Nice poem!