Reviews for Introspection
tuieri chapter 1 . 12/24/2007
it is so difficult to write in second person... you pulled it off nicely :)
Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
I must fave this one. Brilliant, fascinating, and quite refreshing to see second-person perspective. Well done!

Gwyn Baranof chapter 1 . 10/23/2006
Wow. Brilliant. I love your writing, even in so short a piece. The only thing I would like to see more of is subtext. But that is just my opinion.
Tess R. Dickey chapter 1 . 7/9/2006
Wow... I LOVE it, it's wonderful, so discriptive and true. i must fav it... oh yes, and thank you for reveiwing so many of my stories and poems... what was it? four? no matter, Thank you, I rarely get any feedback, but that's what i want the most. *grin*
The Wizards of Eh chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
Hola. You don't know who I am. XP. Guess. It should really be obvious, even if there's nothing written on this user ID... heh heh... besides, I reveal myself in the profile here.

Love the story. It's definately... hmm... facinating. I've always liked things mentioning narrators. Heh heh heh. Oh, yes... definately gotta love'm.

debbie from church chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
Wow...clever, very clever, intriguing and ORIGINAL. Keep it up; you have a gift. It makes me want to start writing again. You made me SEE what you were describing, yet kept me mysteriously intrigued not knowing where it was going; you see I really like well-crafted words too; have for a long time.
Kora chapter 1 . 8/14/2005
Wow! *cannot find words in her small vocabulary to describe this just that three letter word*
Eyetk chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
Wow, don't often see much writing from the second-person perspective. Well done!

The only CC I'd have for you here is that you've got a few grammar errors ('"That’s about it." He says.' should be '"That’s about it," he says.', and a few other things like that).