Reviews for A Forced Rooming: Kate and Matt |
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![]() ![]() i love it so tiffany |
![]() ![]() ![]() The irony of it is hilarious! |
![]() ![]() toooo cliche...kate's character is too obvious |
![]() ![]() (On Fanfiction I am 'DirectionallyChallengedKensh i', in case you wanna know...) Publish this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahaha love this so far my fav comment was Sk8rGurl23: i hate my dormmate he is such a pathetic know-it-all playah GoTigrs465: cute huh Sk8rGurl23: totally hahahahaha he knows her well keep writing |
![]() ![]() Back to my first review. Matt owns A CAR! AND HAS A DRIVERS LISCENCE!. whens he's FOURTEEN YEARS OLD! get your facts/ages right why don't cha. |
![]() ![]() You should REALLY improve on your grammer skills. When someone is having a conversation, each person gets their OWN paragraph. It's not all squished into a sentence like for example, guy: Hey there! girl:Hey how are you? see how they each have their own paragraphs? It's not supposed to be like, guy: Hey there! Girl: Hey how are you? |
![]() ![]() I don't get it. Isn't Matt 14 too since Kate is cause u usually room within ur same grade when ur in a boarding school. So how the HECK could Matt DRIVE A CAR! It makes absalutly NO SENSE AT ALL! u have to be 16 to drive, not *14*! |
![]() ![]() I just wanted to repeat that THEY ARE ALL FOURTEEN YEARS OLD! And this Tiffany character is already a slut/whore and sleeping around! I just REALLY wanted to point that out to you cause it bugs me A LOT. |
![]() ![]() Umm isn't the main character 14? And the guys who r the same age as her are implieing that they wanna sleep with her? Isn't that a bit too young to have those thoughts? Shoudn't u make them a bit older? And I'm geussing that Tifanny is the same age as them and u said "I'd suggest Tiffany. I'm sure sleeping around is one of her hobbies." No offence but thats kinda creepy. A 14 year old who's already sleeping around. I'm 17 so I think I know what I'm talking about. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Xd this chapter reminded me of "A Beautiful Mind", but funnier! |
![]() ![]() i don't know if i missed a bit or something but wat happened to the romeo and juliett play thing? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the way you started this off but it could definitely use improvements (grammatically and in your writing style). However, I'm sure you improved and I can't wait to read to find out :) |
![]() ![]() I'm sorry, but after reading the first /line/ I knew this was just a sorry copy of YAMB. It really makes me sad and wracked with disappointment and rage to know that there are people who would actually plagiarize something so terribly, and so... so pathetically. That story, sad as it is, was the basis of my childhood. It was, above all, my favorite story to read and to know that you're one of the many that would force YAMB off the Quizilla website, thus leading the major great-author drop off of the site, just... sickens me, honestly. Not to mention the fact that I can't seem to find the Philipine is yet another source of my frustration. Me finding this fic is a stroke of... Google, really. I typed in "I'm a Girl in an All Boy Boarding School" and got this bad, terrible, ew story. It makes me want to seriously cry. ... I digress. "I'm sorry" just doesn't cut it. Too bad, I wish it did. |
![]() ![]() BITCH I cANT FUCKING BELIEVE U DELETEE THIS SOTRY NOW RIGHT NOW. FUCK YOU. HOW DARE YOU STEAL YOUANDMEBOTH'S STORIES! |