This is cool, thanks!

worst fucking endind no worst fan fiction ever read

I am basically showering you in compliments I loved this book!

Awe so sweet, though the ending seemed a bit rushed. I still love though :) hope there's a sequel!

Never mind about my question about the wolf lol I looked over the chapter and missed that part. Anyway this chapter seemed a little too rushed and not a lot of detail. I looks the story plot itself, but with the detail you. An make your story come to life. :)

Ooooohhhhh this story sounds interesting already! Though I wish you were more clear as to where the werewolf ran off to or why. Like if it Heard foot steps from her dad or if it took her dad a while...say it was late so he went to go look for her and that when he found her...other than that it was a great first chapter, it leaves the reader wanting more. :)

Omg- freak out. Happy ending

it was really nice i really enjoyed reading it a lot.

I cant wait until she confronts him.

Amazing!

wonderful story!

When I read the synopsis I thought it was very frank and it plus it's finished so I started reading. But I really think that your story is too abrupt. It lacks the kind of fluidity which makes a story smooth and easy to read. However, thank you very much for your efforts.

I really enjoyed this story. It was a wonderful quick read.

Hey! I just found your story - it was nice. So glad about the HEA and how you fixed things for her family - nice of you - lol!

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