Reviews for Swish
Anon chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
I am so glad that I got the chance to read this amazing story before you had to take it down. :) for the amazingness/:( because some people's actions ruin good things.
22writer chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
please please please please put this story back on! :'( i love basketball and this story is awessome writing. i really want to read it! im begging u please put it back on for all your loyal readers! I can tell you're an amazing writer and i reaaly want to read this story! please! if u do i will b eternally grateful to u!
Duckiechic chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
God, I hate people who plagarize stuff! This story was amazing and one of my favorites by far! It's weird that I'm not able to go and reread it over and over again. You're an amazing author, and I really do hope that you continue to write whether you put it up online or not.

Best of luck to you in the future.

-Duckie
Pseudonym59 chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
Lovelyhead,
CaffeineRush chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
I'm so sad you had to take this story down :( I loved it so much. When I came back to reread it again and found it gone, I seriously almost cried.

Good luck with whatever else you write!
crissy19 chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
judging by the number of reviews this story has, im asuming i missed out on a very good story. Iv been reading on this site for almost two years now and i just wished i read it when i had the chance...sucks
larafrancesca chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
I'm just glad I was able to read 'Swish' before you took it down. I hope you wont stop writing altogether - even if you do stop posting on line. Take care and good luck with things, I really enjoyed your story, ~Lara~
me chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
:( :( :( I'm so sad right now. I WANT TO READ THIS STORY (even though i've read it about 3 times already...haha). It's so amazing. If you ever put it up on some other site / publish it, be sure to let us know cause I hope i'll get the chance to read it again sometime :)
Amethyst.Rose.xx chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
aww this story is so good! i was right in the middle of it and i got really sad when i realised that you had removed it :( i understand your reasons for removing it but i can't help being a little selfish when i say that i really want you to put it back up! you're an amazing writer and i was getting really excited reading it but now i cant finish it :( oh well its your choice (:

xx
Melting dew chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
i think that i was very lucky, because i read your fantastic story just in time..! just wanted to say that you would have your reasons to remove your story but i would remember james and taylor definitely...! :))
Jenny chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
Im so mad! Why would you remove!
Piper chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
Im so saad :( i was reading chapter 18 and then when i tried to read chapter 19 i couldnt! Dont remove it please :'(
Rose Rampage chapter 28 . 2/21/2011
Such a fantastic story. Beautiful writing- I enjoyed every minute of it. My only complaint is I found the ending very unsatisfying! I feel like the entire journey unexpectedly ended with James and Taylor getting together after a 2 minute conversation. Don't get me wrong. I wanted, nay demanded, that those two end up together, but my inner fluffy romantic maybe wanted a little more cuteness and resolution to the two people I had devoted the last couple hours of my life to.

But that only accounts for probably like .01 percent of my total opinion of your story! As a basketball player myself, I praise you for your ability to write a sport scene. I imagine it is difficult writing the action of a game, but trust me, you do it wonderfully. I could clearly visualize what was going on in the game to the point where I felt like a spectator!

Again, awesome work. I'm sorry for the plagiarism issues. I very much hope that it doesn't stop you from posting more stories in the future, but if it does, hopefully I will get to read more from you on the printed page :)
Blossom of Life chapter 28 . 2/13/2011
This was absolutely fantastic. The characters were so likeable and so much fun to read about. You are an amazing author!
Wyldfire chapter 28 . 2/9/2011
That. Was. Amazing. When I read the summary, I was a little heasitent about reading this story because I'm not into basketball, but I am so glad I did! One of my absolute favorites on here! Love love loved it: )
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