Oh my tigerss josh is officially mt fav character ! He reminds me of my best friend , buhd hes bii so… just a little diffrent ! Oh my tigerss i love uour storyy ! And srry if i spelled sumthing rng or if im using txt language, its kuhz im revieving off my iphonee and used to txtin like this so yeah !

Oh. My. God. Major cliffhanger. Wow. I can barely write this review because i'm just itching to click the button for the next chapter. That was so intense. I loved the way you wrote it. The first sentence the next chapter better be good...

Another good chapter :) I can't wait 'til the big game. I'm thinking they'll draw. omgsh i'm so excited! How come James isn't in any of her classes? That would definitely give them some more competition ;D

Good chapter. I'd just like to comment; when you write stories, try to keep numbers in word form rather than digits.

Eg. "... a 500 word biography..." - "... a five hundred word biography..."

"...2 classes later, and 3 hours of homework..." - "...two classes later, and three hours of homework..."

The latter is just more grammatically correct. Just keep that in mind in future writing. Other than that, good chap again :)

ooh i can feel the competition coming on. Good first chapter; that game sure was intense. Hoping the next chapter is just as good :)

Amazing. You are a great writer. This was great.

Wow. This story is so awesome! Ah! I love James and Taylor! :D

Love the ending. :)

Wait, what did he tell her?

OFFICIALLY MY FAVOURITE QUOTE: "Whoa, Destiny really doesn't like you, does it?" xD

I think that there should be outtakes for this story and you should put in there what James said about what he thought about Taylor's confessional because here I am, reading this yet again and I get to the part where she has to take off his shirt to kiss him and he's supposed to admit how he feels and then it's just like: No, access denied, you can't actually know what he's thinking, you just get to make yourself crazy trying to properly imagie. Terrible terrible thing that. So outtakes please?

fucking fantastic, almost a favourite.. almost!

I loved this story, it was exactly what i needed and believe it or not i cried more for taylor than i have cried for myself but i've always been emotional - very emotional! lol...anyway there is one thing i hate and thats the ending, i just felt that taylor had to do alot and i know her chasing him was a break through for her, i still think that it would have been nicer if james tried to get her back as well specially after she won the danm game and he blooding kissing that mercedez girl...jeez talk about a heartbreak. Great story, look forward to more works like this from you.

oh mee god...i love the first chapter...specially because of the game...reading about the game gives me shivers remembering my game and the pressure...thumbs up for the superb chpter

I loved it. Best romance story ever. Michael is awesome. Josh is wonderful. That is all.

Cute story. :) I really enjoyed reading it. The ending was pretty adorable.

Okay, towards the end of this story, I started wondering why I felt so… against James and Taylor getting back together. I mean, usually I’m just dying for the main couple to make up so I have a happily-ever-after. But this time I was actually against it and I couldn’t understand why. When I read the ending and felt less satisfied than usual, I thought for a bit, and now I think I know the reason.

I feel as though the resolution is unbalanced. It seems as though when James and Taylor make up, they aren’t putting equal effort into the relationship. I can’t say I’m being objective, but my impression, at least emotionally, is that Taylor has been the one doing the chasing to make up for her mistake. I feel as though James hasn’t put down his pride or uncertainty to apologise. Correct me if I’m wrong. But yeah, that’s how I feel. I feel as though you should get James to do more apologising. Sure Taylor refused to hear him out when he did something wrong. Then they made up when Taylor set down her pride. Then James kissed Mercedes and Taylor got jealous and kissed Ryan and James got really mad. So yeah, it was Taylor’s fault at first. But she realised her mistake soon after and wanted to make up, yet James ignored her for soo long! And in the end, it’s as if James never put down his pride, all the way till she went to his bedroom in his clothes. He was cold all the way. So if you rework this, I think you need to look into that—having them both put equal effort into their relationship.