i love this story i have to say that im glad to have read it..lol and im proud of her for standing up to her dad, and also for getting james back

..oh a tiny idea i think you should write a short stroy about how the girls won the challenge game and the guys had to dance in underware...and with LOTS OF DETAILS;);) dont have to but i would def. read it...lmao

Well. Seriously. That ending was a relief.

I'd have liked it to have been more elaborate (yeah, I'm fishing for the fluffy ending, don't hate on me), but it's great as it is.

I hope I don't seem like a ghost reader, because I'm not one of those - but I started reading about two weeks ago, and I was stuck at the point where the only thing lacking was the last chapter - and that put me in such a state I wasn't even capable of writing a review.

All in all, I really enjoyed this story.

Seeing Taylor grow was rewarding; amazing. I think I might have been shaking myself when she confronted her father.

And then - I'm sorry - another thing about the ending; it left all these loose ends. What about her father; will she be able to return home? Do they reach an understanding?

Her and James were a great couple. I wish that they'd been together-together for a bit longer, but I guess it's an aspect of the story that they had to overcome themselves before settling to be happy (Taylor in particular).

:)

Anyway, this is a lame review. I never quite manage to say what I want in one review that's supposed to wrap everything up.

But what I'm trying to say is... Well, you did a great job with this story.

It's always interesting to read about athletes, and I really loved all the characters.

Thanks for sharing, and keep writing.

enjoy~

Congratulations on finishing this story. I'm sure you must feel ecstatic that it's finally done.

There's been long gaps between updates that I've kinda forgotten bits of the story and the tension has sort of dwindled, but I enjoyed the chapter. It's nice to read a well written romance about sports; they're few and far between on FP.

I spotted a few typographical/grammatical errors which you might wanna look into if you ever feel like editing the story.

Again, congrats on finishing and hopefully you'll continue to write for FP.

Leila

Hi,

Read a story on FP after really long and I have to say I loved your fic!

Too many cliches at times (especially the proclaims love and next second is caught "cheating" one -roll eyes-) but you managed to keep it interesting.

Keep writing and lovely work :)

She never called her friends. Just sayin'.

-Mags

This story is GORGEOUS! There is no other word for it that suits better than that... and I didn't even know before this review that I would ever call a story gorgeous! You're amazing! Tell us all when this is published and in our local bookstores, will you?

hey, i really love this story, i keep reading it over and over again because its that good. I think its the best story ive read so far. You are an amazing writer and i hope you continue writing. I hope you do a sequel or at least an epilogue because i love TAYLOR AND JAMES and i just want to see them interact as a couple together and because we didnt see them cheerlead for the boys maybe that could be the epilogue because the ending was quite brief(or a sequel lol). I love this story and you are an amazing writer. I really hope you consider an epilogue becausei know i and a lot of other fans of this story would be thrilled. But gr8 job and i hope i read more stories lyk SWISH!

I really enjoyed your story. It was packed full of humor, romance, and competetion; the best combination.

You should think about writing a sequel about their senior year, and so on. It would be great.

amazing story probs the best ive read so far :D

but it ended way too soon please please please can you write an epilogue or something? like the boys championship game and the girls cheerleading, patching up things with ryan and mercedes (even tho i hate them both :P) more with taylor and her dad(cos he is still her dad and they live togethor) etc.

this is absolutely wonderful! and absolutely loved it! i just dont think i want it to end :P your writing is fantastic!

Are you going to be writing anymore soon?

x

I have, literally, seen this story on fictionpress dozens of times, and I always wanted to read it, but I was afraid it would never be finished. (I have this thing about getting so into a story and the author never finishing it.) So, I've been waiting to see "completed" by the other stats for the story before actually reading it.

Anyway, I said all that to say, I had huge hopes for this story just from the summary. And now that I've read the entire thing, I can say that your story far exceeded my expectations. It was amazing, fantastic, dramatic, sporty, angsty, and romantic. James and Taylor are truly perfect for each other (especially when Taylor finally got past her denial). I'm so glad they both got it together in the end, that Taylor's team won the championship game, and that she finally stood up to her dad. Awesome ending to a beyond awesome story.

OMG! F*CKIN' FINALLY!

oh man

i was blushing/smiling throughout the entire chapter!

although i felt like it was a bit short or hasty.. but i guess that's the way to go *shrugs*

yeah a little dissatisfied by how it ended so fast

OMG...they finally got together! I was reading this with the most stupidest smile on my face. I'm so glad you did finish it, although there are somethings you haven't really finished. Like the whole girls team cheerleading for the guys or Taylor fixing things with Ryan. I'm a little dissatisfied, but i think STILL GOOD since it is finished.

You know, I think I like the idea better of patiently waiting for you to update a chaper, where as now, the story has come to a complete stop. :( I've enjoyed reading your story. And the connection you had written between James and Taylor were amazing! You're a really good writer! Just because the story is finished, doesn't mean your writing skills should be as well. I hope you keep it in good use. Thanks for taking the time to write an enjoyable story!

Take care,

:)

Naw finally! Yays :)

I loved this story (and was incredibly surprised to find the new chapter alert in my inbox, to tell you the truth :P)

Thanks for posting it up!

...i dont even remember this story... all i remember was that they play bball. and something about an away game in a hotel...or is that a different story...?