|Reviews for Sick Writheling Soul|
| Ebony Stars chapter 1 . 7/25/2005
chilling, the last line was painfully good.
| Azureeyednymph chapter 1 . 7/23/2005
I like it! Keep up the great work!
| Arutha chapter 1 . 7/23/2005
Wow, this is a beautifully dark piece. I love your imagery - rots, sickness, beast, souls, pale, etc - it all comes together to create one over-image that really expresses your point wonderfully. By the way (and you might get a lot of people telling you this, so sorry in advance ;P) "writheling" is not a word. I think you meant "writhing", but the point works just as well ;P Really great poem; keep it up.