Reviews for You'll Just Be BrokenHearted
lady moonlight chapter 1 . 3/14/2007
Wow I love it. The ending was my fav. part. Some times I think this very thing about my self when it comes to guy ( mostly just he one that become my friends cause we all know the one ones that date me dump me fast.) Any ways this poem is so great it is totally being put on my binder. Way to go girl.
The Fourth Fate chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
VERY deep. Hmm. Makes you think. There really are people out there like that, though.

Man don't even get me started. I was at a funraiser this weekend for a woman who was abducted and murdered (and a few other unpleasant things). The world can be such a scary, sad place. There really are people that have no use but to cause others misery. I sort of see this "girl" as someone like that...

Even though you meant this as a warning poem, it also seems like an "I told you so" poem. I mean that in a good way. Like a listen to your conscience way. Very deep. Bravo!