|Reviews for Breakdown|
| Avide chapter 1 . 8/16/2005
I like this one. That simple. I do. Now I'm gonna check out that website...
| midsea chapter 1 . 7/23/2005
I like this. I wish you would take it further though. The concept is great. I understand you only have 60 seconds to write on the word, but you can add more to this. I can see it going somewhere good if you take what you have and run with it.