Reviews for Bleeding Choirs, Dying Children: This Is My Hell
The Fourth Fate chapter 1 . 9/2/2005
*Mouth agape* WOAH. It is positively INCREDIBLE. OMG. It's making me want to write. You how that happens? You read something REALLY amazing and it ignites a burning desire within you write something equally outstanding?

Well yeah. I can't believe this. Simply amazing. WOW. everything. So undescribingly awesome. LOVE it. L.O.V.E. LOVE IT.
Timothy Hazelo chapter 1 . 7/25/2005
I'm in love with this poem. Its the greatest example of choice, love, sin, and suffering you have shown. This poem has a really big story behind it, huge even. This poem is actually hard to call a poem, is a story, that is why. This story is a great one, it has all the intense emotions, Love, Hate, Suffering, Paradice, Heartbreak. All of it is twisted and put into a twisted-story-Poem...Amazing job Scrunchii. I would say your real name...But yeah.
Amariel chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
Wow, that is some very intense imagery.I loved it.
Lynn Lenzie chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
W O W, just wow. I absolutely LOVE this poem. It makes a great deal of sense to one is going on my favorites list!