Reviews for Magic Marker FairyTale
young and the reckless chapter 34 . 7/12/2009
most of all, i love that the ending wasn't happy.

it wasn't tragic, it was very hopeful.

but it still wasn't happy or cliched.

i'll have to check to see if you continued

on anymore with brandon and ruby.

but as for now, favoritefavoritefavorite.
young and the reckless chapter 33 . 7/12/2009
i know there's still one last chapter left..

but i just needed to tell you that i loved it.

i love that brandon fixed everything before he left

i love that ruby was finally happy with herself.

i love that brandon moved on.

i hope that ruby will do the same.
young and the reckless chapter 31 . 7/12/2009
that. is possibly the best scene i've ever read.

totally heartbreaking and amazing.
young and the reckless chapter 28 . 7/12/2009
you wrote that.

young and the reckless chapter 18 . 7/12/2009
"There'd been boys with uncaring hands, ashtray mouths and brutal pick-up lines."

young and the reckless chapter 15 . 7/12/2009
wow. i really expected him to go back to her.

but he...didn't.

way to throw curve balls.
young and the reckless chapter 12 . 7/12/2009
he will be. but not for you, dearie.

even though he'll go back to her...

but that's not the point.

i guess i don't even know if brandon knows about the baby yet.

hmm, that will be interesting.

(sorry for these useless reviews...

i just love jacking review counts.)
young and the reckless chapter 10 . 7/12/2009
yes, yes she does need him.
young and the reckless chapter 5 . 7/12/2009
i don't like ruby.

i do like brandon.

therefore, go brandon!
young and the reckless chapter 3 . 7/12/2009
i love the short prose-like quality of the chapters.

and the poetic principles you're tying into this.

very very nice. :)
Omok chapter 34 . 2/27/2008
Wow. P I expected a happy ending, i guess not. for a short story like this, this is pretty good! O
beyond.that.horizon chapter 34 . 3/26/2007
i think i'm going to cry
Thorn's-girl chapter 20 . 7/23/2006
Wow. I haven't been on in a while, and I guess I missed this, which was stupid because i've been enjoying this particular story for quite some time. The ending is unsatisfactory, but fitting, and by unsatisfactory i mean i didn't want it to end there even though it should have.

"Since when did Brandon perform in public?"


Although I think there should be a sequel. I want to know what ahppens to Ruby.
kit feral chapter 34 . 7/13/2006
For some reason, I really love the picking strawberries part. I also love the line "I barely had time to destroy myself." It's just... twisted perfection. Like this whole piece, really. Huh... I really didn't think this would be her reaction. But I like it. Sad, but really true to life. I'm so happy this isn't going to be the last of them! Keep up the awesome work.
kit feral chapter 33 . 7/13/2006
Wow... I love the way he seems so removed from it, that he's really moved on from her but then you hit it with a line like- "Of course, sometimes I still laid on my roof tiles at night, looking up into the inky sky as the icy midnight air drenched through me, and waited for her drunken phone calls which never came." It makes me sad to read the last lines... I can't wait to find out what she thinks about this. Awesome work, I really missed this story!
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