|Reviews for What's the Point?|
| qblisa chapter 1 . 12/8/2006
I think you captured the ups and downs of life perfectly.
Life if nothing (empty) - A drug which makes you soar - It crashes and you are empty again.
It's an endless cycle of torture and pleasure. It's life and death, because without one, the other can't exist.
Wow, great writing.
| Bella Natty chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
Hey...(always too lazy to log in!)Well...I did take a look in this poem! That I really liked...you could do a great writer someday!
Keep it up!
| AbstractMind chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
it started out good and I like some of the similies and metaphores, but how is death a new life?- if death is nothing?
| iona-buss chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
nicely written. very well structured with a good flow. well done. keep writing. :)
| Crimson-Fantasy chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
nice poem i agree with the points you have made and it has beautiful immagry to it you are very talanted and express things well keep it up R&R sometime if you wish