Reviews for What's the Point?
qblisa chapter 1 . 12/8/2006
I think you captured the ups and downs of life perfectly.

Life if nothing (empty) - A drug which makes you soar - It crashes and you are empty again.

It's an endless cycle of torture and pleasure. It's life and death, because without one, the other can't exist.

Wow, great writing.

Bella Natty chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
Hey...(always too lazy to log in!)Well...I did take a look in this poem! That I really could do a great writer someday!

Keep it up!


AbstractMind chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
it started out good and I like some of the similies and metaphores, but how is death a new life?- if death is nothing?
iona-buss chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
nicely written. very well structured with a good flow. well done. keep writing. :)
Crimson-Fantasy chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
nice poem i agree with the points you have made and it has beautiful immagry to it you are very talanted and express things well keep it up R&R sometime if you wish