Reviews for I Hope You Dance
Guest chapter 18 . 8/10/2013
SHIT ok I wasnt expecting that (the ben thing) ugh what an asshole
Guest chapter 14 . 8/10/2013
Nooooo ben's being an asshole but I really hope they end up together!
displacedfemale chapter 4 . 3/27/2013
yea, i'm sticking with my theory that there are some hidden romantic feelings towards jamie on dave's part. he's a little too over protective as a friend in my opinion, i have plenty of friends who i am fiercely protective over but i don't think i've been quite like he is!
displacedfemale chapter 3 . 3/27/2013
First things first, the guy with the beast of a long name is called Aaron" Where I got Jake from I do not know! i'm going to blame it on being up at 4 in the morning reading.

Aaaw, Dave's come to visit - I can't shake the feeling that Dave has something of a crush on Jamie or at least thinks he might have less than platonic feelings for her and that is why his girlfriend felt the need to mark her territory.
displacedfemale chapter 2 . 3/27/2013
Wow, Jake has a beast of second name on him!

Jamie seems to be settling in fairly well, the exchange when her and her brother first got to the house was perhaps a little awkward, i sometimes think that awkwardness with a family member is the worst kind you can have!
displacedfemale chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
Awww what a sad first chapter!

Even thought Jamie and Dave had what sounds like a pretty perfect friends night out at the beach it was tinged with the sadness of her impending departure.
adriheart chapter 20 . 9/23/2012
I joined this website just to comment on this story. I know it's old and perhaps you aren't even active anymore, but thank you so much for sharing this story. I loved its cleanliness, its sweetness. It was a refreshing change from all the mommy porn floating around. It inspired me to continue writing my story. Thank you again. Wonderfully written and I do look forward to reading more of your stories.
MissKukyMonster chapter 20 . 6/5/2012
Oh man you are such a good writer, that story made me cry so much! (And that's a good thing) Seriously, you put so much emotion and detail into it that I can see it happening. I admit I didn't like this one as much as Aelyn's story, but then as a rule I like happy stories, and while this had a sorta happy ending, it wasn't a very happy story. But the fact that I still liked it enough shows you how much I like your writing! (and I read both of the stories in one night) Thank you so much for sharing!
XxSiennaxX chapter 20 . 6/26/2009
Absolutely wonderful story. I do wish, however, that by some miracle she managed to regain full use of her legs and dance competition Irish dancing again.

Loved your story! :D
M.Bianca chapter 20 . 5/2/2009
I was so sad when I've heard (read) that she wouldn't be able to dance ... but it's very good, not too many cliches (it's impossible to avoid them all, no matter how hard you try)
Erisah Mae chapter 20 . 9/3/2007
This is gorgeous, realistic, and well-written. I loved the contrasting characters that you featured, and the subtle development of the various relationships.


gulistala chapter 20 . 8/5/2007
Aww this really was wonderful. It touched me, it really did. I couldn't help cooing. At first, I wasnt sure who Jamie was going to end up with, but she really did end up with the right person. You're a writer with works of a high quality. Congratulations of a job well done!

gulistala chapter 19 . 8/5/2007
What I dont understand is how this is all Ben's fault? I mean Jamie did go herself and get herself into that mess.
gulistala chapter 16 . 8/4/2007
Gee Jamie's one to talk- she should be doing teh same with Dave. It would hurt more to ignore the pending relationship. Heh. Onto the next chapter!
gulistala chapter 15 . 8/4/2007
“I’m um, sorry to interrupt,” Jack said, his face as red as mine. “But Aunt Jessie wanted you two to know that the little kids will be getting off the bus soon and she doesn’t think they’re old enough to witness that type of thing.”

OMG! That was I think the most funniest thing in this chapter! AHAHAH!

Onto the next chapter!
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