Reviews for In the Hotel
ArchAngel07 chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
Wow this one hit me like a brick,its so touching,wow this is so good, i'm speechless. all i can say is this is awsome
RoseSama35 chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
This was so sad for me to read, and yet I went and read it twice anyway. (I always read poems twice to make sure i catch the meaning of it, especially if I missed it the first time I read it.)

Many people have had those times where they felt like they weren't getting what they deserved out of a relationship, while others are too afraid to actually tell others how they really feel. It is, in my mind, one of the saddest things that can happen to a person when they love someone but don't know that the other loves them back.

Jesse the Storyteller chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
Oh nice. Very nice. Very very pretty and emotion-gushing and etc. etc. I liked it.
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
I like the imagery you've created. Nice job!
Falsetto chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
That's so sad. Good poem. I like how you describe the wife/girlfriend crying. "Tiny gossamer tears, make trails of sorrow, down the apples of her cheeks"