Reviews for Wednesday Morning
whispered something profound chapter 1 . 5/8/2007
First of all, I'd like to say thanx a big binch for reviewing my story! I appreciate it. Second of all, I really like this story! The only thing I'd do is make the change from the "Today is the day after the end of the world" to "today is the first day of the rest of my life!" a little more subtle. I wouldn't give it it's own line and put an exclamation point after it. I really like the idea though. 9/11 changed a lot of people like this.
Ria Moriais chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
Whoa! I had to reread it to get my head around what was happening. It's a very interesting way of writing it. I don't know if I fully understand what's happening (mainly from the summary) but whatever it is, the language certainly appeals to me. And thank you thank you for reviewing my stuff.
MJ Bradley chapter 1 . 10/6/2005
Chilling. Brilliant and chilling.