Reviews for Automatic SelfDestruct
n.p-simmons chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
Okay... interesting way to put it. This is quite dark, but considering the context I think it would be hard to find another similarly-themed poem that is light-hearted and jovial.

I might be assuming the actual subject here, so let me ask: I'm thinking the fear of death and old age overwhelmed you a bit one day? *If that sounds harsh, then I've probably written it wrong...*
frugale chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
I love this poem because of all the biology in it xD I can't help but think 'Apoptosis' would be a nice alternate title, hehe.

The second to last (that would be penultimate, right?) just killed me. So heavy with meaning!
Anna Christie chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
Whoa. That's kinda um... really depressing. haha But it was interesting too, actually! :D
steffxnie chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
Powerful, with great imagery.

'If the world doesn't eat me, I am killed by old age.' Best line.

Good poem, I like it!
Jessicka-scab chapter 1 . 7/25/2005
Original and interesting poem. I love the line 'if the world doesn't eat me', it has a cool dark humour quality to it. Good job.