Reviews for Crimson stream
darkmistresslae chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
This is an pretty okay poem. It's cool how you got your point across powerfully, despite the shortness. The shortness makes it difficult to really look into the poem, I think, but I still thinks it's alright. One thing: the metaphore "crimison tears" is a *b*i*t* overused. So yeahh... Other than that though, good short poem.
Sarah-Brighteyes chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
This was imagery that was vivid. ALmost vampric, at least that was what I was thinking. Very nice. So far this is my favorite of yours.
FunkyFlower chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
wow! amazing haiku. great bio by-the-way. quite unique. awesome work. well done!:-)
An-Author-At-Heart chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
So much emotion in so few words! Nice, it has impact. I like the metaphor you used, "the flood I shed for you". Good imagery, good job.
Ebony Stars chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
it's painful, but also soft and calm. I love it
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/25/2005
Quite passionate.
ygg chapter 1 . 7/25/2005
Wow this is so tragic! Especially the first line and the use of "flood" and "crimson" conveys such sad emotions.. Such a marvelous and deep imagery! Furthermore, the flow is also wonderful in this poem! Really rolls off the tongue. Splendid work! Please keep writing more :)

PS. Thank you for your reviews :-)