very poetic.

OMFG That was one of the most beautifulest things ever! Great job! You should have more of those moments! Seriously!

What a moment to get caught up in! beautiful! Simply beautiful! I can’t even begin to pick out my favourite part, the descriptions were vivid and conjured up a real sense of actually being there, I can see the emotion you’ve poured into this. Well done.

I think you meant lightning but you spelt it every which way wrong. I never got why she was crying, but I liked the persistent description.